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Stories of Age/Time Transformation
by: JohnS52 | Complete Story | Last updated Apr 11, 2015
This is a story that is based off the idea in the story Fresh start. We will follow the experience of 3 different kids and their time at a camp that regresses its occupants
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I am rewriting a lot of the chapters because usually I just rush through them, but now i am going back and adding more details and what not to hopefully make the story a little better... please give feedback at what I am doing wrong, what I could work on, any mistakes you see that could be fixed. Even if you rip me apart and call me shit please still tell me what i can do better. Don't worry about hurting my feelings I want to become a better writer and I need to know what i can do to achieve that goal. CH-1 rewritten CH-2 rewritten Ch-3 rewritten Ch-4 rewritten Ch-5 rewritten-Still adding more to this chapter just a done rewriting up to the current point. |
Apr 8, 2015 |
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After treatment all the campers spend their first day discovering what their new lives have in store |
Apr 11, 2015 |
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Tim's worldTim's world gets turned upside down when he learns that he is going to camp for s couple of weeks. |
Mar 12, 2015 |
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Each camper is assigned a cabin where they are going to be spending their time. |
Apr 8, 2015 |
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Ryan and Ben are 15 year old twins. |
Apr 7, 2015 |
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The first round of treatmentBen and Tim visit the doctor while Ryan has the doctor visit him. |
Apr 8, 2015 |
Stories of Age/Time Transformation