Man with a Smile

by: hello | Complete Story | Last updated Apr 29, 2010


An abusive boyfriend picks the wrong man to beat up. ***My fourth story please leave constructive criticism, and ways to improve upon my TF scenes, Thanks and Enjoy :)**


Chapter 1
Man with a Smile


Chapter Description: An abusive boyfriend picks the wrong man to beat up. *** My fourth story please leave constructive criticism, and ways to improve upon my TF scenes, Thanks and Enjoy :)**


“Stop it!,” screamed Maria. Her boyfriend Luke was livid

he had caught Maria flirting with another man, and no one

flirts with his woman. As Luke continued to land blows

down upon the unfortunate man, he failed to realize one

crucial aspect of the mans demeanor...his smile. No

matter how many times Luke hit the man, he just

continued to lay there with that stupid grin on his face.

“What the hell is so funny!,” screamed Luke as he

smashed the mans face again. The man just lay there his

smile gleaming brighter than ever. His face was bloodied

and bruised but he just kept smiling. “Thats it,” Luke

said, he slowly got up and went over to Maria and started

to drag her back into their house. “Please Luke,” Maria

sobbed, “we cant just leave him on the front lawn like

that.” “The neighbors are going to call the cops or

something.” “Shut up!,” Luke roared. I know what the fuck

I am doing and I could give two shits if the neighbors

called the cops. “But Luke we hav..SLAP! With a slap Maria

went to the floor. She lay there curled in a ball sobbing as

Luke grabbed her by the hair. “You see what happens

when you flirt with other men,” Luke growled inches from

Maria’s face.

With that he pushed Maria’s head back and went

into the living room to grab the baseball bat from the

closet. “No one flirts with my girlfriend,” Luke ragged, as

he grabbed the baseball bat. With the bat gripped tightly

in his hands he proceeded to the front door of the house.

Once there he snuck a peak out of the window just in time

to see that man was slowly starting to get up. “Oh no you

don’t,” Luke said, as he gripped the door knob and swung

the door open. “Where the hell do you think your going,”

yelled Luke, as he ran towards the man who was just

beginning to pat himself clean.

The man so far had just been slightly annoyed at

the childish antics of this man. But know he was beginning

to get somewhat irritated. As the man slowly turned his

head towards Luke, he had a brilliant idea. “Yes,” the

man said loudly that would do nicely. “Thats right,”

screamed Luke, “You had better say your prayers.” With

that he swung the bat as hard as he could. With a

sickening thud the bat cracked the man in the side of the

head. With a look of triumph Luke looked to see if he

had finally knocked that stupid smile off that mans face.

The bat dropped loudly to the ground as Luke slowly

backed up, the fear was evident in his eyes. The man just

stood there his head unscathed by the vicious blow, and

that smile was still there gleaming more than ever. “What

are you,” Luke asked, as he continued to back away from

the man. “Im your end,” the man said calmly as he

started to approach Luke. Luke had rarely felt genuine

fear in his life, but now...now it was real. Quickly Luke

turned and ran back inside his house. He slammed the

door shut and bolted it. Cautiously Luke looked out the

window only to find the man was gone. “What the fuck,”

said Luke, as he slowly backed away from the window. “As

I said Luke...I am your end,” came a voice from behind

him. Luke jumped a little and spun around to see that the

man was now right in front of him his face inches away

from Luke’s. That smile...that terrifying smile still painted

on his face.

“Maria!,” screamed Luke, as he ran towards the

kitchen. Maria jumped when she heard Luke scream, and

quickly turned to see her boyfriend running towards her.

But just as he was about to reach the kitchen he stopped.

The look of fear on his face intensified as he struggled to

move any part of his body. The man that he beat was

standing behind him grinning. “Maria, my dear lady I

have decided to help you,” the man said. “With what,”

Maria said as she nervously looked from the man to her

immobilized boyfriend. “I have found that this man in

nothing short of a baby who cannot let go of anything or

anyone that he deems as his,” said the man as he

grabbed Luke by the back of the neck.

“Please,” Maria said on the verge of tears, “don’t

hurt him...I kno..ow that he can be..a bad person

sometimes...but...i love him.” With that Maria broke into

tears as she held the bruise on her face. The mans smile

faded just for a moment as he contemplated what to do.

“Do not worry my lady,” the man said gently I will not

“hurt” him. With that Luke found that he could move,

desperately he ran towards Maria. But as he ran he

started to feel funny, his clothes seemed baggier all the

sudden. “what the hell,” Luke said a loud, as he grabbed

his shirt which was now a little looser than what I had

been. Maria watched transfixed as Luke, big strong Luke

slowly started to shrink his clothes getting baggier and

baggier as he screamed and continued to run towards her.

“Maria, please help me,” Luke squeaked as his clothes

finally fell off him. He stood there not more than six, his

little body shaking with fear. His muscles had faded

leaving him weak. “This cant be!” Luke screamed loudly.

Not caring that he was weakened, naked, or outmatched

he ran towards the man. The man smiled, sometimes

they never learn. As Luke was nearing the man he

suddenly stopped. The feeling was back again,

“No...please..” Luke squeaked. His body was changing

again, his arms and legs were getting chubbier as he

started to shrink again. “Not wike this..,” he said as he

reached five. “Gots to get way..,” he wimpered as his hair

started to thin. “No!...pwweese..,” he sobbed as he fell on

his hands and knees. “me goottts gee way,” he babbled

as his hair vanished into his head. His teeth were the

next to go as they receded back into his gums. “mee

gooo wnn ga,” little Luke babbled as his body reached

that of a one year old. With that the transformation

stopped, leaving Luke nothing more than an infant.

Maria stood transfixed as she watched the

transformation. Her once strong man had been turned

into a baby right in front of her. Here he was a little more

than one crawling towards her, his little white fanny in the

air. With that Maria suddenly burst into laughter, the man

who had once been so intimidating was now nothing more

than a baby. “Luke couldn’t comprehend what was going

on and why Maria was laughing. He tried vigorously to

speak to her but all that came out what gibberish, he

couldn’t even walk anymore. “gow aar goo” Luke babbled

as he tried to somehow communicate with Maria.

Maria stopped laughing suddenly when she realized

the man was standing right next to her now. “My good

lady,” he said politely, “ Its time that I leave.” “But what

about him,” Maria said pointing down to Luke who was

now on his back after unsuccessfully trying to stand up.

His little legs kicked in the air as he wailed. “He is yours

now, “ the man said, “I have honored your request and

not harmed him.” “Can he still understand us,” Maria

asked. “Yes he can,” the man said, “he can remember

everything, but after a few months his mind will be that of

a regular infants.” “Good,” Maria said, “I would like him to

know how it feels to be the vulnerable one.”

“I am sure he will my lady,” The man said as he

vanished. Maria looked down at Luke as he stomped his

little feet into the tiled floor. She couldn’t help but notice

his little private parts, and giggled softly. “So small,” she

said aloud, as she walked towards her new baby. “Come

on little guy its time for me to do a little baby shopping,”

she said as she lifted the wailing infant up.

 


 

End Chapter 1

Man with a Smile

by: hello | Complete Story | Last updated Apr 29, 2010

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