by: hello | Complete Story | Last updated Apr 29, 2010
An abusive boyfriend picks the wrong man to beat up. ***My fourth story please leave constructive criticism, and ways to improve upon my TF scenes, Thanks and Enjoy :)**
Chapter Description: An abusive boyfriend picks the wrong man to beat up. *** My fourth story please leave constructive criticism, and ways to improve upon my TF scenes, Thanks and Enjoy :)**
“Stop it!,” screamed Maria. Her boyfriend Luke was livid
he had caught Maria flirting with another man, and no one
flirts with his woman. As Luke continued to land blows
down upon the unfortunate man, he failed to realize one
crucial aspect of the mans demeanor...his smile. No
matter how many times Luke hit the man, he just
continued to lay there with that stupid grin on his face.
“What the hell is so funny!,” screamed Luke as he
smashed the mans face again. The man just lay there his
smile gleaming brighter than ever. His face was bloodied
and bruised but he just kept smiling. “Thats it,” Luke
said, he slowly got up and went over to Maria and started
to drag her back into their house. “Please Luke,” Maria
sobbed, “we cant just leave him on the front lawn like
that.” “The neighbors are going to call the cops or
something.” “Shut up!,” Luke roared. I know what the fuck
I am doing and I could give two shits if the neighbors
called the cops. “But Luke we hav..SLAP! With a slap Maria
went to the floor. She lay there curled in a ball sobbing as
Luke grabbed her by the hair. “You see what happens
when you flirt with other men,” Luke growled inches from
Maria’s face.
With that he pushed Maria’s head back and went
into the living room to grab the baseball bat from the
closet. “No one flirts with my girlfriend,” Luke ragged, as
he grabbed the baseball bat. With the bat gripped tightly
in his hands he proceeded to the front door of the house.
Once there he snuck a peak out of the window just in time
to see that man was slowly starting to get up. “Oh no you
don’t,” Luke said, as he gripped the door knob and swung
the door open. “Where the hell do you think your going,”
yelled Luke, as he ran towards the man who was just
beginning to pat himself clean.
The man so far had just been slightly annoyed at
the childish antics of this man. But know he was beginning
to get somewhat irritated. As the man slowly turned his
head towards Luke, he had a brilliant idea. “Yes,” the
man said loudly that would do nicely. “Thats right,”
screamed Luke, “You had better say your prayers.” With
that he swung the bat as hard as he could. With a
sickening thud the bat cracked the man in the side of the
head. With a look of triumph Luke looked to see if he
had finally knocked that stupid smile off that mans face.
The bat dropped loudly to the ground as Luke slowly
backed up, the fear was evident in his eyes. The man just
stood there his head unscathed by the vicious blow, and
that smile was still there gleaming more than ever. “What
are you,” Luke asked, as he continued to back away from
the man. “Im your end,” the man said calmly as he
started to approach Luke. Luke had rarely felt genuine
fear in his life, but now...now it was real. Quickly Luke
turned and ran back inside his house. He slammed the
door shut and bolted it. Cautiously Luke looked out the
window only to find the man was gone. “What the fuck,”
said Luke, as he slowly backed away from the window. “As
I said Luke...I am your end,” came a voice from behind
him. Luke jumped a little and spun around to see that the
man was now right in front of him his face inches away
from Luke’s. That smile...that terrifying smile still painted
on his face.
“Maria!,” screamed Luke, as he ran towards the
kitchen. Maria jumped when she heard Luke scream, and
quickly turned to see her boyfriend running towards her.
But just as he was about to reach the kitchen he stopped.
The look of fear on his face intensified as he struggled to
move any part of his body. The man that he beat was
standing behind him grinning. “Maria, my dear lady I
have decided to help you,” the man said. “With what,”
Maria said as she nervously looked from the man to her
immobilized boyfriend. “I have found that this man in
nothing short of a baby who cannot let go of anything or
anyone that he deems as his,” said the man as he
grabbed Luke by the back of the neck.
“Please,” Maria said on the verge of tears, “don’t
hurt him...I kno..ow that he can be..a bad person
sometimes...but...i love him.” With that Maria broke into
tears as she held the bruise on her face. The mans smile
faded just for a moment as he contemplated what to do.
“Do not worry my lady,” the man said gently I will not
“hurt” him. With that Luke found that he could move,
desperately he ran towards Maria. But as he ran he
started to feel funny, his clothes seemed baggier all the
sudden. “what the hell,” Luke said a loud, as he grabbed
his shirt which was now a little looser than what I had
been. Maria watched transfixed as Luke, big strong Luke
slowly started to shrink his clothes getting baggier and
baggier as he screamed and continued to run towards her.
“Maria, please help me,” Luke squeaked as his clothes
finally fell off him. He stood there not more than six, his
little body shaking with fear. His muscles had faded
leaving him weak. “This cant be!” Luke screamed loudly.
Not caring that he was weakened, naked, or outmatched
he ran towards the man. The man smiled, sometimes
they never learn. As Luke was nearing the man he
suddenly stopped. The feeling was back again,
“No...please..” Luke squeaked. His body was changing
again, his arms and legs were getting chubbier as he
started to shrink again. “Not wike this..,” he said as he
reached five. “Gots to get way..,” he wimpered as his hair
started to thin. “No!...pwweese..,” he sobbed as he fell on
his hands and knees. “me goottts gee way,” he babbled
as his hair vanished into his head. His teeth were the
next to go as they receded back into his gums. “mee
gooo wnn ga,” little Luke babbled as his body reached
that of a one year old. With that the transformation
stopped, leaving Luke nothing more than an infant.
Maria stood transfixed as she watched the
transformation. Her once strong man had been turned
into a baby right in front of her. Here he was a little more
than one crawling towards her, his little white fanny in the
air. With that Maria suddenly burst into laughter, the man
who had once been so intimidating was now nothing more
than a baby. “Luke couldn’t comprehend what was going
on and why Maria was laughing. He tried vigorously to
speak to her but all that came out what gibberish, he
couldn’t even walk anymore. “gow aar goo” Luke babbled
as he tried to somehow communicate with Maria.
Maria stopped laughing suddenly when she realized
the man was standing right next to her now. “My good
lady,” he said politely, “ Its time that I leave.” “But what
about him,” Maria said pointing down to Luke who was
now on his back after unsuccessfully trying to stand up.
His little legs kicked in the air as he wailed. “He is yours
now, “ the man said, “I have honored your request and
not harmed him.” “Can he still understand us,” Maria
asked. “Yes he can,” the man said, “he can remember
everything, but after a few months his mind will be that of
a regular infants.” “Good,” Maria said, “I would like him to
know how it feels to be the vulnerable one.”
“I am sure he will my lady,” The man said as he
vanished. Maria looked down at Luke as he stomped his
little feet into the tiled floor. She couldn’t help but notice
his little private parts, and giggled softly. “So small,” she
said aloud, as she walked towards her new baby. “Come
on little guy its time for me to do a little baby shopping,”
she said as she lifted the wailing infant up.
Man with a Smile
by: hello | Complete Story | Last updated Apr 29, 2010
Stories of Age/Time Transformation